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Tuesday 7 June 2016

A Life-like Dream

Jamie was laying in bed sleeping, she was in a deep dream but she thought it was real life. In her dream Jamie was with her parents, she stayed very close to them. Her ‘Life Like Dream’ was set in a dark forest but there was only a stiff light ahead of them.  


Later on her parents suddenly disappeared into the shadows of the forest leaving behind a foam. As soon as her parents disappeared she panicked, she tried following the light that was ahead of her but as she got closer the light seemed to be going farther and farther away. One of her biggest fears were dark forests especially when she was alone in one.


Soon she started calling out for her parents “Mum, Dad!” As she was yelling in her dream, she was also yelling aloud. Her parents heard her, they ran straight into her room and when they saw that she was having a nightmare they woke her up. When Jamie woke up she sighed in relief and she pinched herself in case she was still dreaming. Jamie looked at her parents and hugged them as tightly as she could they both smiled at her then hugged her back.
  


4 comments:

  1. That's scary and really well written ! If my parents disappeared into a dark forest I'd be terrified ! Keep writing , you have got a talent for it ! Thanks for sharing it. I

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  2. That's scary and really well written ! If my parents disappeared into a dark forest I'd be terrified ! Keep writing , you have got a talent for it ! Thanks for sharing it. I

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  3. Thanks for commenting on my blog I really appreciated it.

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  4. Hi Seini
    Good work, you put alot of detail in your story.That was scary reading your story,if my parents just dissapered I will ring the cops straight away.Keep writing and good work

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