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Thursday 25 September 2014

Punctuation

We are learning to…
  1. Add appropriate punctuation  . , ! “ “ ? :
  2. Find the main ideas in the text
  3. Organise ideas in order to separate into paragraphs
  4. Add more detail to ideas/sentences (Vocab, sentence types)

1. PUNCTUATION:
* Add the correct punctuation to the paragraph below
we went to my uncles house because it was my cousins birthday he had a birthday cake and on it there were ten candles and he blew them out with a big puff but they wouldn't blow out and my uncle started dancing and we said he was being silly so we went outside and played on the bouncy castle


2. GROUP MAIN IDEAS:
* Copy your punctuated paragraph and paste it in the box below
* Use the highlight tool to highlight the main ideas
We went to my uncles house because, it was my cousin’s birthday. He had a birthday cake, and on it there were ten candles. He blew them out with a big puff, but they wouldn't blow out. My uncle started dancing and we said he was being silly. We went outside and played on the bouncy  castle.



3. ORGANISE PARAGRAPHS:
* Copy your paragraph with the main ideas highlighted and paste it in the box below
* Separate the sentences into paragraphs
We went to my uncles house because, it was my cousin’s birthday.

He had a birthday cake, and on it there were ten candles. He blew them out with a big puff, but they wouldn't blow out.

My uncle started dancing and we said he was being silly.


We went outside and played on the bouncy  castle.







4.RECRAFT PARAGRAPHS
* Copy your separated paragraphs and paste it in the box below
* Use the main ideas to recraft the text (add more detail, use a variety of sentence types, and interesting vocabulary)

We went to my uncles house because, it was my cousin’s birthday.He was turning ten years old.






He had a birthday cake, and on it there were ten candles. He blew them out with a big puff, but they wouldn't blow out.

My uncle started dancing and we said he was being silly.


We went outside and played on the bouncy  castle. I had a great time with my cousin.

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