We are learning to…
- Add appropriate punctuation . , ! “ “ ? :
- Find the main ideas in the text
- Organise ideas in order to separate into paragraphs
- Add more detail to ideas/sentences (Vocab, sentence types)
1. PUNCTUATION:
* Add the correct punctuation to the paragraph below
we went to my uncles house because it was my cousins birthday he had a birthday cake and on it there were ten candles and he blew them out with a big puff but they wouldn't blow out and my uncle started dancing and we said he was being silly so we went outside and played on the bouncy castle
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2. GROUP MAIN IDEAS:
* Copy your punctuated paragraph and paste it in the box below
* Use the highlight tool to highlight the main ideas
We went to my uncles house because, it was my cousin’s birthday. He had a birthday cake, and on it there were ten candles. He blew them out with a big puff, but they wouldn't blow out. My uncle started dancing and we said he was being silly. We went outside and played on the bouncy castle.
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3. ORGANISE PARAGRAPHS:
* Copy your paragraph with the main ideas highlighted and paste it in the box below
* Separate the sentences into paragraphs
We went to my uncles house because, it was my cousin’s birthday.
He had a birthday cake, and on it there were ten candles. He blew them out with a big puff, but they wouldn't blow out.
My uncle started dancing and we said he was being silly.
We went outside and played on the bouncy castle.
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4.RECRAFT PARAGRAPHS
* Copy your separated paragraphs and paste it in the box below
* Use the main ideas to recraft the text (add more detail, use a variety of sentence types, and interesting vocabulary)
We went to my uncles house because, it was my cousin’s birthday.He was turning ten years old.
He had a birthday cake, and on it there were ten candles. He blew them out with a big puff, but they wouldn't blow out.
My uncle started dancing and we said he was being silly.
We went outside and played on the bouncy castle. I had a great time with my cousin.
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